Promoted to Advanced!

[Foxspirit]

Gotcha.

[Foxspirit]

Below Iceland, hidden by fog, and buried under brooding clouds; a small island the shap of a teardrop bears the wild, but rather tranquile country Isonthia (In-son' thee-ah) where beasts, carry their liftime in depressing silence. Rain tumbles from the bleak sky, in unceasing torrents, gorging rivets into the earth, and collecting into a flooded river, constantly flushing the excess into the ocean which, when reaching the sun, evaporates into clouds that, drawn by some unfathomable force, replenishes the marchy lands with a shower in an infinite cycle.
Ducks waddle slowly through the lakes as if waterlogged, their beeks sagging as they stared into the crystal water that forever spiked with landing raindrops.
The seals drifted through the icy currents, their skin paler than common relatives, due to the lack of sun. Their friends, the river otters, look like white silk, their fur constantly slicked down to a silky sheen.
Both wild and feral cats remain extinct from the beginning of the Turn when the sun disappeared forever from the cursed land, as well as the vibrant flowers that had dotted the counrty side.
Trees: like soggy black skeletons, crying for their loss of lush foliage, replaced with water soaked moss now beginning to fade away in the endless wash of rain.
The seasons remain bleak, and colorless, as if the land itself had been drained of all colors. The animals' eyes shifted to a pearly white as they grew accustom to the dark, shadowy landscape.
Fish were swept from the lakes, and food became scarce for the seals. They were forced to search for seaweed to stave off the knawing hunger in their stomachs. Soon, the water snakes found themselves run from their homes, chased by the seals driven mad with hunger. They found their kind vanishing like the sun so many decades ago, and they took refuge in the foreign marshes where they hung from the trees to escape the vicious seals' teeth.
Three years later, every animal wasted away, and the island sunk to meet its grave at the bottom of the ocean. The clouds cleared, and the sun sparkles on the ocean ubove the island.

[Fang]

Flowers:...... unheard of.

You might wanna make a sentence or two out of this. Maybe something like "Flowers are unheard of in this deserted, curse land, etc." Or something... I'm not sure.

[Foxspirit]

Done! Do we wait for Kipcha now?

[Fang]

Yep. Better get out the 5000 page book.

[Foxspirit]

I'm looking for it. I seem to have left it somewhere......... XP

[Kipcha]

Sorry. I took a really long time.
Yeah, like Fang said, also with the "Trees:" thing.
Also, "They were forced to search for seaweed to stave off their empty stomachs." It should be "to stave off.." and then something like "... off the emptiness in their stomachs" or something. Because4, well, you don't eat to stave off your stomach.

But very, very good. 8.7/10.

[Fang]

Because4, well, you don't eat to stave off your stomach.

Too true. =P

[Foxspirit]

Lol, I didn't see that one! XD

[Fang]

Alright... I think Kipcha has another assignment for you. Shall we wait again?

[Foxspirit]

Sure! Only problem would be if you had to wait for me. I've been tons busier ever since school started up again, so you'll have to read by yourself. I'll constantly be on my feet chasing time.

[Fang]

That's fine. It's nice to see at least one of us is responsible... I have about 5 projects due soon and I havn't been doing any of them. =P

[Kipcha]

Okay, now as part two of your first assignment, describe an entirely made up species that lives - or, in this case, used to live - in your made up creature. No less than two paragraphs.
And, once again, the criteria:
- Full exterior description.
- A name. (Of the species, of course, not of each individual one).
- Diet. (Plants, stones, meat, ect.)
- Habitat.
- Predators. (Any natural enemies and/or threats).

[Foxspirit]

You mean, create a creature to live in my made up world? ('Cause I kinda killed it off...... lol)

[Fang]

Yeah, that's what she means. And she said to describe whatever used to live in your world. So you're okay.